Dear Sir o MadamI am the captain of the basketball club in Banyoles, Catalonia. The name of the club is The Banyolins. I am writing to you because we are planning a tournament and we are looking for sponsors.
The tournament will take place in London in May. Teams from 23 countries and fans 20,000 are going to be in London for this event, and I think that it will be good publicity for your company.
Please contact me if you are interested in sponsoring us or if you need any more information. I look forward to hearing from you.
PRESENTATION We made a powerpoint with photos of the Royal Family, for got more attention of the audience and did a funny the presentation. We spent around 4,5 minutes.
BODY LANGUAGE I was nervous and I looked to the public but I read a little bit. STRUCTURE We organist the structure chronologically. CONTENT The information was correct,we show photos of the people we were talking and we used exempels .
LANGUAGE We spent a lot of time making the content and revising the grammar. I think it was correct, and the vocabulary was rich too. In a few moments we repeated some words and I pronoune bad because I was nervous.
PHONETICS I pronounce all the words properly, but I was very nervous and some words maybe I didn't pronounce very well.